Apparantly I shouldn't be "outlining" the figure in the gesture phase. Ugh, I'm getting worse, I feel that I have to unlearn everything I have taught myself, without losing my own style. It's hard, but I really want to do it. I want to be confident in my drawing.
These first drawing are the gesture (which apparantly I'm doing wrong, it's not supposed to be about LINE, it's about the "spirit of the pose", the intent, it needs volume. I apparantly am outlining, no action....ugh, ugh, ugh,